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This is chapter one of my first multi-chapter fan fic involving KoKame and JinDa, I hope you like it. Comments are welcome. I own nothing but the story..

Title: what took you so long
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the story, the guys belong to Kitagawa and JE
pairing: Kokame and JinDa ( KoKame, JinDa, and MaruNo)
Author: Mrs_koki
Lenght: multi-chapter
Summary: Sorry I kinda suck at those, read it instead



Koki’s pv.




Everybody had just come back on stage for the encore the fans were screaming for....well....not everybody, to be honest after what koki saw his crush doing w/Jin on stage he never went back for the second encore. To his not so great astonishment neither had his friend/band mate Ueda, who, it is safe to say, is in the same mood as the latter. Now, to say that both were jealous and depressed would be considered a great insult to their moods. After what they witnessed during last night's fan service between Akame, it sent them both beyond those feelings. Koki and Ueda just looked at each other and decided to shower and change early and just as they were leaving to head back to the hotel  the rest ( respective crushes included) walked in the room.

Not having the strength, nor emotion to spare, they just walked out without a backwards glance. The thing is....if they did take the time to notice. then both would’ve noticed the hurt and confused expressions on both Jin’s and Kazu’s faces...one would think that they just dumped or something. ( especially since they always played around to work off some the extra energy that was pent up after a show)


“Hey Koki?”

“Yeah, what it is Ueda?”


“Um, do you really think it was a good idea to have just left like that without saying anything?”



At this Koki stopped and leaned against the wall. “ I don’t know Tatsuya.....I don’t really know anything more” sighs koki.

Seeing the look in his friend’s eyes, Ueda puts his hand on his shoulder and muttered, “ I know, Koki. I feel the same the way you do, I fell in love with Jin after all.”

Koki was about respond to what Ueda said when he froze like a deer in the headlights of a fast on coming car. “ Shit.” was all that came out of his mouth.

“Wha...? Damn!” Ueda had heard it too. “ Let’s get going before they come this way, since I am not exactly in the mood to sit through what would feel like the Spanish Inquisition tonight.”


Since Koki wasn’t in the mood for it either, they bolted for the hotel and their room. It was lucky that they wound up by sharing the same room, they were both asleep by the time the others showed up...or so it seemed anyway. As two heads peek around  their door and all Ueda and Koki hears them say to the rest....” shh!! They’re asleep.” as Junno and Yuichi both check on Koki and Ueda.

Date: 2010-10-08 02:20 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] tatsuya-bocchan.livejournal.com
Hey, so what is the story point. Koki n Ueda jealous of jin n kazu being close?
Time line, what concert?

Date: 2010-10-08 05:20 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] mrs-koki.livejournal.com
It's not just that, it's that both Koki and Ueda have been in love with Jin and Kazu for a long time. Since neither one has had the courage to confess it's tearing them up inside and one or other has always belonged to someone else. I am trying to write to where there is this self-destructive aspect to it so I am still kinda writing at the same time as I post what's already done. You know they spent 8 days in the TD? Well, I am expanding that and just changing the location.

Date: 2010-10-11 10:52 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] tatsuya-bocchan.livejournal.com
You mean LJ cut? Block the sentences that you want under cut, then, click the LJ cut button.

If you want to post it at community,

Type CLICK HERE or anything else. Then block it. After that click the globe button *the left globe* insert your ff link there.

Date: 2010-10-11 05:15 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] mrs-koki.livejournal.com
Arigato, ne. I'll let you know how it turns out.

Date: 2010-10-12 04:27 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] tatsuya-bocchan.livejournal.com
Ganbatte!! And goodluck XD

Date: 2010-10-12 04:32 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] mrs-koki.livejournal.com
Thanks, I get the feeling that I am going to need it.

Date: 2010-10-12 07:48 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] mrs-koki.livejournal.com
Exactly,since I don't where chapter 4 is going to go at the moment. Read ch.3 and if you have any thoughts or suggestions they would be really helpful. Oh and I have pinched nerve located somewhere in my shoulder blade area so that kinda doesn't help me at the moment,lol.

Date: 2010-10-11 05:33 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] mrs-koki.livejournal.com
It worked thanks for the help. *hugs*

Date: 2010-10-08 09:40 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] tatsuya-bocchan.livejournal.com
Ho, tokyo dome, BTR i..c..
You must include the... Eh wait, this is jinda...
*hiks, bec i like junda and kazujun and kameda at the same time i often difficult to choose pairing. Lol*

Oh, self denial. And no one of that akame aware that?
I hope you'll write the real character. Well, since it take the real setting.

I'm waiting. Ganbatte!

Date: 2010-10-09 05:24 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] mrs-koki.livejournal.com
Okay that last part of that really made no sense,lol. What are you talking about....you confused me.

Date: 2010-10-10 04:47 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] mrs-koki.livejournal.com
Oh you mean the summary for the fic?

Date: 2010-10-10 11:59 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] tatsuya-bocchan.livejournal.com
Oh? I just say sorry. Sumimazen mean sorry.

Well, summary is good setting they were so young there

Date: 2010-10-11 04:21 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] mrs-koki.livejournal.com
Gomen, na. So, what was the last part of your last comment anyway? I am still confused about it.

Date: 2010-10-11 08:32 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] tatsuya-bocchan.livejournal.com
HM... u take their real character right?
as KAT-TUN them self. not like dorama or else.

i don't really like some story that my friend made, the use KAT-TUN but the character is so much dufferent with the original.
it's ok if they use their name only. like another fantasy story. or drama queen story line ^-^a

Date: 2010-10-11 09:02 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] mrs-koki.livejournal.com
Don't worry about that, I use them as kat-tun. But I may change their occupation and what not, but I wouldn't do the whole doreama cross over. Unless it's untentional.


I am still having trouble putting these chapters behind links. I can get the link change thing down, but the actual chapter still appears under it. That needs to disappear and show up when you click on the link. Can you help me?

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