Chapter 3

[mrs_koki]

Title: What took you so long
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot
Author: mrs_koki
Pairings: Kokame, JinDa and MaruNO
Rating: NC-17.....maybe?

Here's chapter 3. As I know where chapter 4 is going to go, I'll post it..



 

 

 

 

　

Night of the concert

 

　

　

　

During their MC talk, when Kame was joking around with Tatsuya, another surge of jealousy coursed through Koki’s veins. It showed it’s self when Kame had put his arm around Ueda ( who in turn had a guilty look in his eyes) and besides, Koki couldn’t be mad at Ueda anyway nor could he blame him for what it did to him...not that he would blame Ueda for something that wasn’t his fault. Koki immediately separated the two of them, reacting in too big of a manner and almost gave himself away. He managed to laugh it off when Kame said “ What? Are you jealous now?” and the subsequent razzing comments came his way. Only it was true as Koki admitted to Yuichi and Junno later that night after the concert was long since over with, albeit before Kazu walked in the room, and Ueda, in turn, also regretted the incident knowing what passed through Koki’s eyes at the time. This was also before Jin showed up.

 

“ Why don’t you confess to him already, it would be the easier thing to do. But if you want to continue self destructive streak you’re on, Koki....” Junno just shrugs.

 

Yuichi was about to ask Ueda the same thing when the last two people on earth should walk in and they immediately cut their conversation short.

 

“What are you guys talking about?” Jin asked.

 

“ Confess to who?” Kame inquired when he walked into the room followed closely by Jin.

 

“Nothing.” All three said at once.

 

Jin just looked at Kame and shrugged. Kame, meanwhile, went to track down Koki. Who, by that time, had left the room as quickly as he could, all the while cursing himself for not having the courage to do what Junno had said he should do.

 

After fifteen minutes of searching he found him sitting on the now empty stage, the fans having just left the arena.

 

“Why are sitting here all by yourself?” kame asked, with a hint of curiousity in his voice.

 

He didn’t need to look up to know that it was Kazuya sitting next to him, he felt him just as he came onto the stage. Now, as strange it sounds, Koki was always able to tell when it was Kame next to him or when it was someone that wasn’t kame.

 

“ Kazuya....” was all he could say.

 

“ Come on, out with it. Something has been bothering you for quite a while now, you and Uebo both. Now what’s going on with you.” Kame stated rather bluntly.

 

So he had noticed the change in me, as hard as I tried to hide it.

 

Koki thought to himself

Now to say that Koki wasn’t man enough to admit his feelings to one he loves, would be an unfair accusation, the only thing(s) he’s afraid of is what it would do to the group and to his friendship with Kazuya, or worse what if he was rejected and he lost of  the best friend he’s ever had and, not to mention, he was scared of what Kame's reaction would be to his darkest of secrets. Now  Kame, on the other side of the same coin, wasn’t worried about what would happen within the group or to his friendship with Koki. All he wanted to was to finally make Koki his once for all. Also to finally taste the lips that have been haunting his dreams for longer than he liked. A goal, I might add, he was going to achieve come hell or high water but how he was going to accomplish such a thing....now that was a different story all together. Now, if he can only get Koki to look at him and coax him into making the first move. So, he decided to do his fan service with Koki the next night and with that final thought he went back to the hotel room and went to bed.....after all Koki’s evil little angel needed his sleep too, especially if he was going to pull this off. While the others were alseep, Koki was off drowning himself with alcohol....again....drinking it seems to the point trying to kill himself, when all of a sudden he blackes out and when he woke up he found himself lying in the hospital with a very worried looking Ueda (who went looking for him when he didn’t come back to their room and he found Koki unconscious and barely breathing, outside by the pool with at least 10 or more bottles lying around him) siting beside his bed.

 　

 

　

Comments

[tatsuya-bocchan.livejournal.com]

The situation grow slowly. And kazu actually has the same feeling like koki.
Huff, i think u must put them in the situation that they must saying the truth. Maybe uepii mush blow up. Lol. The time when he finally couldn't stand of akame things need more kameda quarrel. Lol. They are S anyway. Kazu n Uepii ^-^
And as he saw koki that way, maybe uepii will angry when kazu show his innocent face.

[mrs-koki.livejournal.com]

Oh KameDa will fight alright that's a fact, but the question is when. Since the only one that knows the extent of Koki's sef-destructive behavior is the Selfish Prince himself and vice versa. Maru and Taguchi have some idea about it, mainly Uepi's...but not Koki's ( not really anyway). All I do know is that the next chapter is going to take a bit longer than the last three did and to think I still have the whole other half to do, which is Ueda's PV.

[tatsuya-bocchan.livejournal.com]

Try that.
I trust the destiny of Uepi in your hand now. Lol.
Well, when? Maybe when both of koki n kazu have done something stupid that danger their selves. It can make Uepi reachs his nerve. Lol. Though he, himself doesn't go to any important point with jin. Lol

[mrs-koki.livejournal.com]

I want to write to where everybody knows about Koki being hospitlized due to alcohol posioning, excpet Kame and I may up borrowing your idea of Kazu doing something equally dumb. With work and with everything else going on in my life ( like trying not to strangle my sister.....long story) I need at least a day or two to come up with something that could work. As far as the Uepi story line, I want to finish up the KoKame one first...that way I can fully concentrate on JinDa. I want to do JinDa justice as Ueda is your ichiban.

[tatsuya-bocchan.livejournal.com]

LOL... it will work find.
ganbatte!!!!!

LOL JinDa justice will be excellent XD

[mrs-koki.livejournal.com]

I hope so,lol. Thanks for all the help, I doubt very much if I could do this without you. *hugs*

[tatsuya-bocchan.livejournal.com]

*hugs*
glad i can help :)

[mrs-koki.livejournal.com]

*smiles*

[user9368.livejournal.com]

hey mrs.koki... this is natsuki or mrs.kamenashi either way is fine.
i get where your going here. and i understand what your trying to say and the only reason im not criticizing this is because i know i cant do any better...

[mrs-koki.livejournal.com]

Natsu??


Is this supposed to be a compliment? If it is then thank you. But yeah, this new chapter is going to take a while before I get it posted as I don't know where, exactly, I want to go with it. I hate when fan fics just take off on their own like this, moreover, since I didn't plan for that to happen to this one,lol.

You could if you actually tried it, ya know?

[user9368.livejournal.com]

i guess but ... its a lot of work right?
writting a fanfic... it would take time right?

[mrs-koki.livejournal.com]

You have no idea. But yeah, it takes time and it's alot of work. But it also depends how long it is as well. The one-shots can be done in like 10-15, whereas the multi-chapter ( the one mine turned into) take a really long time to complete and you have to be able to keep the story straight in your head. But it's alot of fun at the same time so I wouldn't let the fact that it's takes time and stuff like that keep you from writing one. I didn't, in fact, I used to think the same way you did...mrs.Kamenashi...and I originally wasn't going b/c of the time and the amount of work that might be involved. But I got bored enough one day and the story was already running through my head, I started to put pen to paper and I found that once I got started it turned out to be quite fun; and I am still having fun with it. Albeit I am a bit frustrated at this point in regards to chapter 4's direction....but I should have it worked out in the couple days or so.

[user9368.livejournal.com]

take your time and dont post it until your sure you like it.

[mrs-koki.livejournal.com]

I know, that's what I am doing, Mrs. Kamenashi